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what does that mean?
Contributed by
muno3
on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 07:55:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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you are so lucky to be HERE
WHAT DOES THAT MEAN?
I don't feel lucky...I feel fear
Safe dark walls of smooth cool grey
everyone has something to say
warm sunny beach and water so blue
on my mind, in my soul,the hours are few
can't just leave but can't just stay
purgatory,limbo,nothingness day
WHAT DOES THAT MEAN
to hell with it all,suffer in silence
no one wants to cure the blindness
makes them squirm and turn away
back to nothing...cold and grey
I KNOW WHAT IT MEANS
Copyright ©
muno3
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2004-01-27 19:55:19]
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Re: what does that mean?
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by Letting_Go on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 09:02:42 PM AEST
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| Wow dark and powerful. Hits my soul. Many can agree with you including me at this stage and before this stage. I liked your poem. |
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