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To Shed A Tear
Contributed by
Letting_Go
on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 08:19:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Maybe if you died,
I would be able to forgive you for leaving me.
I've never seen this situation so clear before.
I've never been so sober.
You weren't unique after all.
Just like the rest you left.
I'm not surprised anymore,
Still just down hearted.
I'm not alone,
I'm friends with my pain.
And I've got someone to count on,
- Me -
As my blood trickles down the drain.
And as the smoke clears in my garage.
I open my eyes.
I'm still alive.
My phone sits silent,
As I get more violent than I've ever become.
There was no tears there,
But God knows I needed them.
As the metre dropped,
There was no way I could have stopped that moment.
Angry blood had rushed to my head,
I have no excuses,
Only causes instead.
The tears still didn't come,
After I saw what I had done.
After that nothing had changed,
I was still the only one.
My face went into the crying position,
No tears came,
My voice quivered,
But no one was there to listen.
If you ever come back,
You'll find that I am not here,
Cause I finally shed a tear and carried on.
Copyright ©
Letting_Go
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2004-01-27 20:19:22]
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Re: To Shed A Tear
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by aprillie on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 08:24:18 PM AEST
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| Thats beautiful. I can completely understand where your coming from. I myself have been there, and maybe still am. But very nice job. |
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Re: To Shed A Tear
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 10:45:09 PM AEST
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this was very sad I don't know what to say except that i liked this. I wish I had more words of wisdom and strength but I am lacking at the moment.
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Re: To Shed A Tear
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 01:55:39 AM AEST
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Thank you for sharing this... right now I need to shed a tear but can't seem to do it...but I know it will come soon... Lovely write..
Welcome to YPDC..
Jenni |
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Re: To Shed A Tear
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by Fairy on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 02:43:12 AM AEST
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| I actually wanted to thank you for this write.. it's brought back some emotions I once felt.. there are so many that we go through and it's not easy to keep track of them all... keep up the good work and I'm sorry for your grief |
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Re: To Shed A Tear
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 12:30:24 AM AEST
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Nicely written Lg,this was pretty sad...It's true though that when you finally do shed that tear everything seems better,even if it isn't.You just feel like you let go of everything bottled up inside...I liked you poem,keep writing,
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Re: To Shed A Tear
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 10:53:13 AM AEST
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| I think this was an incredibly good and powerful write. It was very well written and I could fully relate. Nicely done. |
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