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a memory almost lost
Contributed by
rain
on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:21:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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soft jeweled wings flutter almost silently
and go unnoticed by many
i hear them not only with ear but also with an open heart
when the wind blows softly through my hair
corressing my face i can feel the slight warmth
from a minature hand and smell the sweet
primrose for that instant in time
i know they are there behind each leaf
and beneath each growing muchroom
waiting for my eyes to wonder away
before they begin to come back into focus once more.
they played with me when i was young
and unchanged by the world
tickling solf bare feet when i cried
forceing a laugh when a tear wished to fall
and keeping me company on dark nights
when i felt so alone.
though the world crushed most memories of those pleasent times when all i felt was joy
i still remember my friends from long ago
and to this day my only wish remains to be that they will someday once again trust me and show theirselves to me like they did back then.
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rain
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2004-01-28 08:21:11]
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Re: a memory almost lost
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by 13Hopes on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:59:15 AM AEST
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Great write, a pleasure to read...
Cheers,
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Re: a memory almost lost
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by MissLee on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:47:42 AM AEST
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| Very good write, I hope everything works out for you hon! |
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