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just let me heal
Contributed by
rain
on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 09:37:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
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i hear your words as if there distant, far away
i hear your words as if you wishper them to me
though my face refuses to show it
they perice me though my heart and soul
each a spear of heatred you've let go on me
i want to scream
i want to cry
i wanna let go of all this pain inside
that you've caused me today
and everyday of my life
since i met you
but you wont go away
and let me stay here to heal.
i hear your words intagnizing me
i hear your words pushing me down
making me bleed
making me scream all over again
i want to scream
i want to cry
i wanna let go of all this pain inside
that you've caused me today
and everyday of my life
since i met you
but you wont go away
and let me stay here to heal.
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rain
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2004-01-28 09:37:37]
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Re: just let me heal
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by Disenchanted_Poet on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 09:48:07 AM AEST
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very cool write. I like the way this work in progress is progressing. Very nice..
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Re: just let me heal
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 02:20:08 PM AEST
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Great write....shows a lot of promise...
(It does need a spell check tho')
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