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Innocence of a ghost
Contributed by
gery_giggles
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Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 05:52:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Who holds the lonely tears
that fall from the innocence
of the ghost alone in the dark?
Born with the hate and sadness
from the cruel ones all around.
Shadows like memories
haunt dreams that time remembers.
Innocence of a ghost all alone,
can't someone hold her tears?
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2004-01-28 17:52:13]
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Re: Innocence of a ghost
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by Letting_Go on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:08:28 PM AEST
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| Hey a piece of ingenius work here. Definately held my interest. I like the time remembers line because I believe this is so true. Although you may have forgotten something for the time being. Time can bring it back up wham in your face. Very interesting piece, I liked it. |
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