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What i was
Contributed by
gery_giggles
on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 06:01:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Bleeding deep inside my eyes
are visions that dance
on my heart.
Without warning i fell to the ground,
locked in chains time created.
I let everything die as one.
Left without a chance,
crying to feel warmth on my hands.
Bleeding deep inside my eyes,
i remember a memory where i once smiled,
but time kept me chained down,
waiting for a hope i thought i lost.
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2004-01-28 18:01:55]
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Re: What i was
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:48:29 PM AEST
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I've felt like that tons of times. I thought the whole damn poem was beautiful, but one line really stuck out, "i remember a memory where i once smiled," That really hit me up. Beautiful poem once again.
Bobo (Joel)
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