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Letting her go
Contributed by
Shadow
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Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 06:23:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Love is always hard on the heart
Most of all when you must part
To lose the one thing you hold dear
Even the strongest will shed a tear
I remember the first time we lay arm and arm
I cradled her softly soft from harm
The world around seemed to stop
On the day on that fields hill top
I remember the first time she saw the sea
She gave me a hug and ran to it in glee
She floated and swam till the sun did set in the sky
I swear she cried as we waved goodbye
Now its gone away in the light
I had to cry at such a sight
Sometimes I sleep upon here bed
I still cant believe my baby is dead
Copyright ©
Shadow
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2004-01-28 18:23:03]
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Re: Letting her go
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by MissLee on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 06:27:59 PM AEST
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| That was very good, I am sorry for your loss. hugs and love to you;) |
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Re: Letting her go
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by faith_my_eyes on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 06:39:04 PM AEST
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Oh....
Such a beautiful write. I am so sorry....
I can somewhat sympatize. I just lost my father, but my Father in Heaven is taking care of me... may the LORD wrap His loving arms around you.
God's best I wish you,
Emily |
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Re: Letting her go
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by sugar0986 on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 06:39:46 PM AEST
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Yes this poem was Great! I'm sorry for yuor loss, hope you feel better soon.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: Letting her go
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by forever_lonely on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:11:26 PM AEST
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Truely a beautiful write full of everything that makes us human.. emotion.
Im also sorry for your loss, but it will get better, i promise
All the best keep it up, head and writes
Luke
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Re: Letting her go
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by Letting_Go on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:16:56 PM AEST
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| Oh man what can I say this was good. Truly sad at the end. Was such a nice write with such a tragic ending. Sometimes sleeping on her bed is just something that I can understand you have to do too. Tragic when you lose someone. I can totally sympasize (Spl?) with you. A great write here. |
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Re: Letting her go
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 11:43:22 PM AEST
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| You did manage to put you thoughts into words very well. Good poem. Sorry for your loss though. |
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