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It Rained That Day
Contributed by
Mouth
on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:47:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I remember it rained that day-
As you stood in my doorway
Hair tangled a fray.
With your swarthy stare
And urbane smile.
How I was so alive to know
You might stay a while-
Talk about the small things
Over coffee and cigarettes.
Remembering how confused life gets
In the midst of it all,
When we were young.
Our mouths led by our tongue
Instead of reason, Or importance of words.
We used to laugh so hard,
At times, I thought we'd wake the dead.
But we'd just end up crying instead.
You stood so tall
Your eyes had this sense of purpose,
Oh, how I loved you then.
I remember it rained that day
You stood in my doorway
Hair tangled a fray
When you'd make the rain go away,
Oh, how I loved you then.
Copyright ©
Mouth
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2004-01-28 20:47:00]
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Re: It Rained That Day
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by Letting_Go on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 08:51:39 PM AEST
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| Could almost be a song. This was excellent. |
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Re: It Rained That Day
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by monkey on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:33:20 PM AEST
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Wow. Nice poem. I can feel the emotion.
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Re: It Rained That Day
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 04:14:51 PM AEST
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Beautiful full of emotion and love
Awe some poem
Superb
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: It Rained That Day
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 04:08:25 PM AEST
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Wow..this is excellent!! Great imagery... I enjoyed this very much..thank you for sharing it..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: It Rained That Day
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 09:15:29 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem. I can feel the sadness in it.
Take care.
Andrew |
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Re: It Rained That Day
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 8th March 2004 @ 01:32:51 AM AEST
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| I liked this one. It really made me think about what love is. I like the standing in the doorway part alot. Nicely done. |
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