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Soul Enhancer
Contributed by
ygraine_17
on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 10:02:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Open the door to a strangers wind
Echoes of conception
View the kill, seize the prey
Mind evolves to one soul purpose
One thought, so many ways
Drift into dreams
Come here once more
Pleasantries be known
To live out worship, to have the custom
One soul figure, forever be mine
Live for the wealth
Breathe without deception
Fatigued with passion
To hold our body close to birth
To need the tension
Fight for pain, fight for terror
Close the door to a smiling face
Return is clear
Feel the love, see the curse
Today is forever, Today is you
Copyright ©
ygraine_17
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2004-01-29 10:02:05]
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Re: Soul Enhancer
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 05:17:51 AM AEST
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Wow!
I noticed u r a student, that's cool but u already write like a pro.
Very good, direct 2 the point and very strong!
hugg, luv,
emy
thank u so much 4 the awesome comment on my poem |
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