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Do I seem Bulletproof?
Contributed by
shypoet_1986
on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 05:52:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Do I seem Bulletproof?
Well how come you have to keep shooting?You can already see that your bullets
are slowly shredding me to pieces.
Do i seem Bulletproof?
Well how come you shoot me when I'm down?
Although I'm torn, helpless no threat to you
it still seems right to 'finish me off.'
Do i seem Bulletproof?
Well how come this bullet just passed through?
You used to tell others 'oh he can take it'
so i didn't expect this when the gun blew.
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2004-01-29 17:52:08]
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Re: Do I seem Bulletproof?
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by bluoreo on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 02:19:30 PM AEST
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This poem had great emotions, and I can definately relate to not being bullet broof. I hope everything works out for you. Thanks for the great write.
-Eric
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