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Myself, Unwanted
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 10:13:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This room is so dark...
I can't see anything
but I want to see red
I can see you.
But I want to see red
This room is so dark
This life
This pain
This love
no gain...
JUST SHOOT ME IN THE ***** HEAD NOW
please
...please...
Oh, I'm sorry,
Is that against the rules of your
inane little society??
Bite me, cuz I don't care.
But I do want to see red
This world
in which I
oh I want to
fall away....
Oh, God, stay...
There is blood on my hands but
I know you don't care...
You torture me,
You love me,
and the tears reveal
myself unwanted
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
... [
2004-01-29 22:13:14]
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Re: Myself, Unwanted
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by ilhsa on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 10:18:27 PM AEST
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| you know who this is i like that poem alot |
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Re: Myself, Unwanted
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 01:28:55 AM AEST
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I've been there buddy, but yer a funny chap lots of ppl like u I'm sure. Keep up the writing and good to see your postin on here again.
Peace man,
Joel (Bobo) |
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Re: Myself, Unwanted
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by emphaticplacebo on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 08:41:56 AM AEST
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Thats a really great poem, its raw and passionate and breaks the bounds of conventional style, which I think I like the most about it.
Keep up the great work, perhaps check mine out sometime :) |
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