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Composure
Contributed by
remy
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Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 03:58:52 AM in AEST
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could we start something again?
i missed what missing you was for
since i closed the door and walked the other way.
the doubt is sinking and it's got me thinking
that i'm headed in the wrong direction today.
nothing has changed.
it's like the pocket change fumbled
not quite so assembled falling through pockets.
you can throw it down or pass it through the town
but it keeps amounting to little like regret.
so i've changed
so i've tried.
but it's not like i'm so different.
so much the same
no i didn't lie.
the picture stays in it's moment.
could we come back to that end?
press a rewind button right to start
come back that part where we were pieced together.
it's always for me to believe and stay naive
wishful thinking keeps me topside or whatever.
so you've changed
so you've tried.
but it's not like you're so different.
so much the same
no i didn't lie.
the picture stays stuck in the moment.
but i don't.
not sorry don't worry forgive me i'm hurried
i'm wanting for something you know me what's coming
sorted through the change.
cut across the range of firearms
without a mark but i'm harmed in composure.
so i feel a little shook up over what well look
see the piece of this picture now i'm so sure
feeling strange
feeling tried.
forget the mess i've addressed it's different.
all the same
all in a lie.
like all the others give me a moment...
Copyright ©
remy
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2004-01-30 03:58:52]
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Re: Composure
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 05:32:55 AM AEST
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Wow now!!
very unique!
It definently rocks!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Composure
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by emphaticplacebo on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 08:59:25 AM AEST
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Excellent poem... very creative way of getting your thoughts across, I really really enjoyed reading it, and I hope to read more from you.
If you like, check out my work sometime :) |
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Re: Composure
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 02:16:30 PM AEST
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This one sure pulls at the heart strings.... but I know you're strong so you'll get through. Beautiful write.
Dani |
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Re: Composure
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 10:43:56 AM AEST
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| WISH IT WERE EASIER LETTING GO OF THE PAST- GREAT WRITE |
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Re: Composure
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 02:29:01 PM AEST
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I liked.
the style and message created a ringing in my ears. nice job. |
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