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hush the night
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 01:55:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Signatures By
The Tired Lion
this sweetest kiss of
fragrant wine so slowly dancing
nor music played; the mind's enchanting
please capture me within' your melody,
how is it love was born to us?
together we so much the same
hearts skip beats, we whisper names
in this place sweet bond; held true
no matter now, what we may say or do
because this is our wish, mine and yours
upon our dreamscapes beachless shores,
touch me again, leave me breathless, staring
into your deepest soul's eyes, so filled with caring
as heated breathless whispers hush the night
whenever you need me, i will hold you tight
in my arms you can fall asleep, knowing
your safe; loves breath gently blowing
soft kisses upon the wind to you,
all your wishes, desires, dreams i'll keep safe
oh, once again, please, take me to that place
where all the worlds disappeared it seems
until we wake from this untimely dream
please kiss my mouth, hold me to you
a piece of my soul rests with you,
what of this precious love that bloomed?
passion consumed; devouring us in its kiss
in this, most, sensual bliss.
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Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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Re: hush the night
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 02:02:33 AM AEST
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Soft, enchanting and oh so beautiful. Leaves me in a dream like state of mind :o)
Gorgeous write!
Roses
Larry |
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Re: hush the night
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by venkat on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 02:41:42 AM AEST
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| It sings a very sweet song to the mind..just drifting me into a romantic dream..hehe.what a wonderful write.. hugs and love.. :o) venkat |
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Re: hush the night
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 04:07:48 AM AEST
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| Sweetly romantic, enchanting ... beautiful write Nessa .... Jan |
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Re: hush the night
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by Stalkee on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 01:04:30 PM AEST
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| as larry said, left me in a dreamy state of mind. That was, wow...beautiful and awesome and...i dont even know what to say...im left sittin here at my computer in amazement...wow, awesome job - Your buddy |
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Re: hush the night
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 04:58:14 PM AEST
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| Awww, Nessa, this is beautiful. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: hush the night
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 07:19:35 PM AEST
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mmmmmmmmmmm
Shari |
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Re: hush the night
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by Merry on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 08:06:07 PM AEST
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A wonderful romatic write - dreamy and warm - straight from the heart.
merry |
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Re: hush the night
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by Kie on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 11:42:28 PM AEST
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| Your writes are so romantic, inspiring, dreamy. I commend you, simply beautiful to read. Kie |
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Re: hush the night
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by shelby on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 10:37:45 AM AEST
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ahhhhhhhh Nessa so dreamy and romantic beautiful!!
michelle |
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Re: hush the night
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 04:33:13 PM AEST
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whew this one rocks like a tornadoe-n-soars to the intamacy of luv, very powerfull, full with luv, life, hope, assurence, we all need some off this kindda luv!
sweet nessa his heart must be racing with passion.......frpm this one.
luv, huggs,
emy
smileelssssss
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Re: hush the night
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:03:43 PM AEST
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Love is strange, but this poem has enlightened me, who knows I may now begain to understand it. Wonderful poem Nessa, you have always had a way with words.
The Phantom |
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Re: hush the night
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by Lionel on
Thursday, 19th February 2004 @ 10:38:16 AM AEST
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| whew - Lady fawn, thats so warm. Glad I don't have a weak heart. |
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