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Moments In Time
Contributed by
Steb3544
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Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 04:14:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sitting here looking at your picture
my eyes fill up with tears
tears of joy
tears of sadness
tears of joy for all those times we spent together laughing
tears of sadness for all those times we fought
but most of all
tears of sadness ,for the time you said goodbye
dont say good bye again.
Because I dont know if I can take it this time
or take you back again
I was hurt so bad.
But now Im fine
your love healed my wounds
and I hope our love can heal our wounds
bind us together again
sitting here looking at your pictures
my eyes fill up with tears
But this time its only tears of joy
for we are together
for we are together forever
and tears of love
because I love you...
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Steb3544
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2004-01-31 16:14:14]
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Re: Moments In Time
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by amandadawn1982 on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 04:52:39 PM AEST
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| Great poem, shows a great amount of passion and hurt within the works. |
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Re: Moments In Time
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by jeanie on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 05:39:32 PM AEST
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this was very nice :D I like the way you put contrasts, that always works with me :)) great job!
jeanie |
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