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Forgotten Thoughts

Contributed by amandadawn1982 on Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 04:50:12 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Lying awake
Restless mind
Uneasy senses
Quivering fingers
Aching bones
Everlasting dreams

Repetitive memories
Reoccurring images
Dreaming reality
Horrid nightmares
Shocked eyes
Impressive flashbacks

Terror screams
Shaking lips
Wet Cheeks
Streaming tears
Upright position
Uncomfortable heat

Rapid breaths
Harsh pulse
Darkened surroundings
Fading horrors
Quiet silence
Sudden remembrance

Calming sound
Slower breathing
Unrelenting heart
Tired strength
Welcoming Embrace
Soft support

Seductive touch
Sweet Kiss
Reassuring smile
Forever secure
Tormenting dreams
Cease existence

Copyright © amandadawn1982 ... [ 2004-01-31 16:50:12]
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Re: Forgotten Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 05:09:05 PM AEST
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well done. this is excellent!
short and snappy words always go alone way... i really like it.

Re: Forgotten Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Eve on Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 05:12:34 PM AEST
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I love the way it doesn't waver from pattern, and yet isn't the slightest bit monotonous. Seems to be simple, but is really more complex than a knot.

Wonderful write.

Keep writing,
-Eve.

Re: Forgotten Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by hope on Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 11:40:38 PM AEST
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its like you see me when i'm sleeping....very well put ....nightmares are horrible...especially when their due to things of the past they are terrifying. Great work...i look forward to reading your poems
hope

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