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Losing Love
Contributed by
Philophobia7
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Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 08:51:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Your love was special
Came unto my life
I loved you so much
I held you so close
It's all my fault
I let love lose control
The pain is on my hands
The blood should be from my heart
I believed in something
I hoped it would come true
But as it should have been
This would of never started
I am to blame
My body feels the shame
Sweet lover
Sweet sorrow
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2004-01-31 20:51:43]
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Re: Losing Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jazz on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 10:42:25 PM AEST
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We are only human. We, as poets, seem to let our hearts into things before we let our heads. I am guilty as sin, when it comes to that sense. But just as much, we jump back.
I liked the last two lines... Sweet sorrow...
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Re: Losing Love
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by NightOwl on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 03:26:04 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this... it seems we all can in a way. And it hurts so much, more than you can know until you truly lose someone, whether in body or in spirit. Well done...
Erin |
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