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You Loved It
Contributed by
annabell
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Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 12:20:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I knew it was dangerous,
but I never thought it would be you I'd miss.
I watched you every week,
the trophy I knew you'd seek.
But it all went wrong that night,
and it happened in plain sight.
I tried to get to you,
but the men held me back they wouldn't let me see you.
Saftey first was always your motto.
If only we could have known.
I stand around the track tonight,
I wish you could see it, it's one heck of a sight.
You know your little brothers doing great.
Everybodys telling him it's fate,
but I know better.
Being his big brothers what he's after.
Justin painted your number on his door.
Said you always desearved to soar.
I know your watching over us,
and hate seeing us make all this fuss,
but I wish you could be here tonight.
All the tributes to you what a sight.
I miss you,
we all do.
Copyright ©
annabell
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Re: You Loved It
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by Cancer on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 12:44:56 AM AEST
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both sad and beautiful. very tragic write.
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Re: You Loved It
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by Letting_Go on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 02:07:35 AM AEST
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| What a loss. Yes sad the accident and beautiful your words. |
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Re: You Loved It
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 06:05:16 AM AEST
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I am very, very sorry for your loss. My sister's boyfriend died a few years ago in a Motorbike Accident. We all think of it now, as that he died doing what he loved, even though he was so young, and didn't deserve to die so young.
This poem is a wonderful tribute. Once again, I am sorry for your loss. |
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Re: You Loved It
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:13:27 PM AEST
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| This is a beautiful tribute to the man you loved. So sorry for your loss. |
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