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My Redemption
Contributed by
TundraHydra
on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 02:05:02 AM in AEST
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Drifting all away
Not knowing what to say
Blind to the world around me
Wish it would be alright today
I dream of times long past
In a place where nothing lasts
For now I will sit and wait
All the time for me to contemplate
Chorus
This is my redemption
Living in a lie
This is my redemption
This is why I cry
Damn bastards killing time
Mocking my existence
Restraint constricting
Holy *****! Crashing forward
My mind conflicting
This ***** is too heavy to hold
I cant carry on
Or so I am told
Now I am all alone
(Chorus)
Cry for an end to it all
Dead end in a wall
Cant answer the call
Smile as I hit the end of the fall
Help wont came
It never will
Sharpen that knife
As I swallow this pill
(Chorus)
Goodbye, goodbye
This is my redemption
This is the way of life
This is the best redemption
On the edge of a knife
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TundraHydra
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Re: My Redemption
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by poetrygodslove on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 02:26:21 AM AEST
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| good write.. but the thoughts.. hope change... dont do anything ok... tomorrow gets better.. worries you had last week and last year have passed you will get through this as well...take the lords hand.... sandy |
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Re: My Redemption
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 04:06:36 AM AEST
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this was beautiful I loved it... i hope u aren't actually feeling like this however, but I can relate all to well.
Bobo (Joel) |
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