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Rain Like Tears
Contributed by
evryrose
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Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 02:47:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Here comes the rain again
Dripping, falling
Cacading down my window like a
Trail of tears
Each drop rolling into another
Gliding steadily down the glass
Until it hits the ground
Forming the puddle my eyes refuse to cry
Emanating the longing that flows like a river
Through my very being
In my veins, my blood
Velied in crimson uncertainty
Unsure of tommorow, but knowing
That today there is rain
Weeping for me, expressing what I cannot
Say in words
Copyright ©
evryrose
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2004-02-01 02:47:22]
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Re: Rain Like Tears
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 04:20:33 AM AEST
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A sad image, but captured so well in your words.
I hope the sun will shine through those tears soon.
steve |
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Re: Rain Like Tears
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by Kie on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 12:20:58 PM AEST
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| Your words painted such a sad image. I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing. Kie |
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Re: Rain Like Tears
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by gery_giggles on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 12:46:49 PM AEST
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really sad poem......but it was very good...
luv always |
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Re: Rain Like Tears
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by intelectualpoet on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 12:48:45 PM AEST
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| sweetheart, I really enjoyed this one. I think you captured Sandie's feeling quiet well. I hope that the rain doesnt make you cry b/c of me ;-) |
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