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Where You Ought to Be.
Contributed by
eternityslyre
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Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 09:09:33 PM in AEST
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There's a gap in the blankets
Yet the bed's made for one
There's a gap in the blankets
When the days full and done
There's a gap in the blankets
Where a person could be
There's a space on the mattress
And that person's not me
There's a gap in the blankets
A cold pocket of air
There's a hollow inside me
And someone should be there
There's a gap in the blankets
Well I'm waiting, you see?
There's a space in my two arms
Where you ought to be.
Goodnight....
~The Palatine Poet
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Re: Where You Ought to Be.
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 11:03:10 PM AEST
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Nice writing,loved it,
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Re: Where You Ought to Be.
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 01:51:04 AM AEST
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Wow, I never figured you to be one for romantic poems. I really enjoyed this, you seem to have ungodly talent in any category.
Truly,
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