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It Hurts
Contributed by
ToriVeigh
on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 11:12:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It hurts so much
I dont know what to do
I hate losing touch
I hope were not through
To know youre in pain
And not be allowed near
Knowing I cant explain
Fills me with fear
My past is my past
And I want to move on
But Im now outcast
And you are withdrawn
Its you I want to comfort
But you dont want me near
I want to soothe your hurt
The sight of me you cant bear
I cant blame you
For what it is you feel
Its not a pleasant view
I wish none of it were real
Nothing can be done
Ill have to wait and see
For you have good reason
To want nothing to do with me
Copyright ©
ToriVeigh
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2004-02-01 23:12:15]
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Re: It Hurts
(User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 01:46:49 AM AEST
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IF YOU'RE ANYTHING LIKE HOW YOU WRITE,YOU CAN'T BE THAT BAD! THE POEM SHOWS ALOT OF FEELING!! HE JUST
MIGHT BE MISSING OUT ON SOMETHING GREAT,BUT JUST DOESN'T REALIZE IT YET!
GREAT POEM,& GOOD LUCK!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: It Hurts
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 03:01:58 AM AEST
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In all sincerity, I fail to understand what this guy's problem is. He does not deserve the love you hold for him. I say you try to find someone who will cherish that love, because there are many who would kill for a chance at such a great thing.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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