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Broken Mirror
Contributed by
booboo
on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 11:26:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A broken mirror
A distorted face
A shattered heart
A clear distaste
A fallen fear
A reddened eye
Adownturned mouth
A year gone by
A loaded gun
A finished fear
A bloodied wall
A broken mirror
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booboo
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2004-02-01 23:26:19]
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Re: Broken Mirror
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by texasw97 on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 11:43:42 PM AEST
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| Coolio.say what inspired you to write. i'm glad you wrote about instead of doing it. that's what i like about poetry. you can just write how you feel at that particular time. anyway nice peace. i don't care if it was deep. i like it when people are not afraid to express their inner feelings and troubles. I'm cool with your work, just as long as you keep writing about it |
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Re: Broken Mirror
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 01:43:08 AM AEST
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SHORT & SWEET! REALLY INTERESTING &
WELL CREATED!! IT SPEAKS FOR ITS SELF
& I REALLY LIKED IT!!! NUFF-SAID!!!!
DAN!!!!! |
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Re: Broken Mirror
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by Chanti on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 08:05:56 PM AEST
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Wow, short, but beautiful! I loved it alot.. great work!
-Chanti * |
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Re: Broken Mirror
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by Asatru on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 05:20:06 PM AEST
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| It's really good, I don't know what to write - speechless... it was just completely awesome and overflowing with emotion. |
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