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In His Defense
Contributed by
ToriVeigh
on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 09:18:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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He is worthwhile
If you could only see
Ive made him cry
When hes inspired me
Hes given so much
And Ive let him down
Ive done such
To make him frown
My poems display
Only a part of me
Theres much to say
Of what you dont see
It was by his suggestion
That I began to write
It was by this action
I found the will to fight
I hold him in high regard
Because he deserves it so
Although hes finding it hard
To let some things go
His standards are high
And he holds himself to them
Hes special in my eyes
From them my love stems
Of the two of us
I believe youd choose
Me to be callous
And him the abused
Copyright ©
ToriVeigh
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2004-02-02 09:18:02]
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Re: In His Defense
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 09:59:26 AM AEST
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| i don't under-stand this much, but the rhyming is really good! |
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Re: In His Defense
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by poetrygodslove on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 12:22:02 PM AEST
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| you have put him up on a pedistal you need to be there to....we all say and do things to the other person...just go and tell him you care and thanks for being there for ya... love the poem sandy |
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Re: In His Defense
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 10:53:43 PM AEST
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SOUNDS LIKE WE WERE LOOKING AT THE LAST ONE,THE WRONG WAY! BEING TOO HARD ON HIM,GREAT POEM & NICE POINT!!!
DAN!!!! |
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