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Requiem
Contributed by
Eve
on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 03:47:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Float on
An emerald sky
Don't care
Life passed by
Dream of
All you love
While you're
On clouds above
Look there
Life's not fair
Your gem-
Dream's requiem.
Your mind's
Gone and away
You don't
Know what may
Catch you
If you fall
Don't cry
When they call
Look there
Life's not fair
Your gem-
Dream's requiem.
Copyright ©
Eve
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2004-02-02 15:47:24]
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Re: Requiem
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by winged on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 04:17:22 PM AEST
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| I like it |
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Re: Requiem
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 06:25:45 PM AEST
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As do I, winged, as do I . . .
Nicely done. I kinda wished there was someone else nearby who could've read it aloud till me while I closed my eyes-- it seemed to need that type of setting. All in all, though, very purrrrty. Can I borrow your pen? ;-)
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Re: Requiem
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 02:18:18 AM AEST
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interesting... float was a good word to describe it...
it resonates well, partially because i love the word requiem
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Re: Requiem
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 05:45:15 AM AEST
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Hmmm...never lose that pen, it has been the catalyst for some awesome poetry. I wish I could sprout some wings and live this poem.
One last thought: I think this would make a great song; a slow, haunting tune comes to mind...
Keep writing, or have your pen switched with a "suck" pen,
-V.S. |
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Re: Requiem
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by Lessa on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:20:00 PM AEST
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| this is a cool peom, great visualism |
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Re: Requiem
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 03:16:54 PM AEST
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This is nice. The visualism is excellent. Well done.
Andrew |
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