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Things are looking up
Contributed by
AliB
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Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 06:23:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Finally things are looking up
I'm feeling so much happier now
My son is starting school again
I'll be at home on my own again WOW!
I won't know what to do all day
Though I'm sure I'll be kept busy
I think I'll do some spring cleaning
The house does look a bit messy
I'll worry about how he's doing
But he's a big boy now, he'll cope
Just hope he settles down quite quick
I suppose all I can do is hope
So, soon I can concentrate on ME again
I'm doing a computer course you know?
And I'll carry on with my writing
I really feel I'm good to go
I'm feeling much more confident too
I've even made new friends
My life I feel is back on track
Thanks for listening
The End.
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AliB
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2004-02-02 18:23:33]
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Re: Things are looking up
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by Dawny on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:18:38 PM AEST
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If I hadn't just read your forum entry I would say glad things are looking up for you. This is a really good poem, and I really hope Daniel gets back on track, take care Ali
Love Dawny x
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Re: Things are looking up
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:02:19 PM AEST
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Glad to here things are getting better for you.
I'm trying to catch up on all the ones I missed lately! Christina |
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Re: Things are looking up
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by emystar on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 10:01:12 PM AEST
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Good work!
Very good, positive write!
As a writer myself, I've come to know that most of the time solitude is my best friend.
Look what a master peice that u put out.
great job!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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