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The Night the Sky Stayed Blue
Contributed by
SerfSnake
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Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 08:25:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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the night the sky stayed blue
there was no lightning
but the smell of rain
was on her body
and I slept on her lawn
cause I could not crawl
then came the rose
of mourning
the merciful swelter of noon
had the vision of
an ice pyramid
not like a sketch
but real in her eyes
silent and unchanged
the night the stoplight turned orange
memories of her in the passanger seat
angelic bittersweet
Knowing I was doomed
in a special way
like ice cream
bends a spoon.
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2004-02-02 20:25:23]
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Re: The Night the Sky Stayed Blue
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 09:39:06 PM AEST
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I must say serf,you write beautiful love poems..please keep posting more !
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Re: The Night the Sky Stayed Blue
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by full_blur on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 10:54:50 PM AEST
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| very nice. You paint a beautiful picture with words, while maintaing a nice rhythm throughout. |
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