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Suicide of the Mind #1
Contributed by
Disenchanted_Poet
on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 11:37:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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nawing away at all my brain cells
eeping up a high pitched yell
nots forming in every which way
nowing something will happen today
try to keep these thoughts from my mind
nstead of darkness, my thoughts just shined
solation just made my problems worse
f I don't get away, I'm going to burst
ove was so good, yet is was taken away
eaving me alone in this place to stay
iving I heard was all fun and bliss
ord, what the hell do you call this?
ost from the world I have found myself
eft away from the others on this high-up shelf
ooking for some other way to get out
istening to the voices inside my head shout
aybe my life here was not meant to be
eaning of life was not meant for me
aking all this pain leave me has only one price
y life for my death, call it a sacrifice
veryone tries to tell me which path is right
ven though my interests are not in sight
ventually they will see it is for the best
verything goes dark as my soul sets to rest...
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Re: Suicide of the Mind #1
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by JadedExistence on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 11:45:03 PM AEST
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"My life for my death, call it a sacrifice"...very good. Sad and dark and very emotional.
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Re: Suicide of the Mind #1
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 03:56:14 PM AEST
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| Style wise, word wise... All arond wise. That was hot no doubt. Love it because thats how i feel right now. Awesome. |
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Re: Suicide of the Mind #1
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by GuyJular on
Sunday, 29th August 2010 @ 12:31:26 AM AEST
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| The pic thin isn't working on my comp |
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