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dust
Contributed by
idiotbox
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Wednesday, 4th September 2002 @ 03:52:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i, like dust have no meaning
dust wanders and lands
no point to its wandering no decision
no fighting.
i ,like dust have no soul
it was takin from me.
i am nothing anymore
i ,like dust was once part of something
now i am alone and floating
i like dust can be blown away
by the wind or a soft blow
from someones lips.
easily forgotten and always looking
for where it belongs
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idiotbox
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2002-09-04 15:52:29]
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Re: dust
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 4th September 2002 @ 09:07:36 PM AEST
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| Hi idiotbox, Welcome to YPDC..I liked this very much. Altho it is very sad, it was well -written. I love the metaphors used...Hope to see more of your work. |
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Re: dust
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by MisterRight on
Thursday, 5th September 2002 @ 04:36:19 PM AEST
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This is a great piece of poetry, I loved it. Keep 'em commin'.
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