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A stranger
Contributed by
Fairy
on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 06:50:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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A strangers knocking on my door
Demanding to know where Ive been
Wanting to know if Im alive
Or if Im hiding from someone
A strangers leaving me messages
Demanding me to pick up the phone
Wanting to know if I still care
Or if I would rather be alone
A strangers writing me letters
Demanding me to contact them
Wanting to know why I never even showed
Or if something just came up
A strangers driving by my house
Honking their horn many times
Yelling for me to come outside
Cause they want to talk to me
A strangers coming by my work
Asking where I am
Yelling because no one will say
They want to track me down
There is a stranger staring at me
Asking what went wrong
Wanting to know what they did
You are a stranger to me now
Dont care who you really are
Or why you lied to me
Im looking in the mirror
So very confused
Cause theres a stranger staring back at me
Copyright ©
Fairy
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2004-02-03 18:50:52]
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Re: A stranger
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by kieran on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 08:34:36 PM AEST
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Wonderfully abstract! is this poem all about not really knowing anyone even yourself? or something about identity and sub identities..or even a realisation of old age and that you have grown into something you didn't want to? I like it!
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Re: A stranger
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by Letting_Go on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 08:36:44 PM AEST
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| Wow what a twist, I was thinking the stranger was death, you were trying to get away from it. But this was very clever. I liked this very much. Once again I can relate, funny that. Good work here Fairy. |
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Re: A stranger
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by Fairy on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 01:40:05 PM AEST
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There's a lot of people or things that I could say the 'stranger' is, expecially myself.. I guess it's everyone and everything that I seem foreign to, yes it might even be death.. My mom had died about 3 months after I wrote this so who knows.. Thanks everyone for the comments.. it makes a world of difference..
Fairy
~Jessica~ |
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