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Physical State Nostalgia
Contributed by
Xenodata
on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 07:07:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Emptiness and loneliness,
Why do I feel this deep inside?
What have I really left to hide
Other than my lack of happiness
A hole so profound, no sound
In the darkness, my heart pounds
Forward in a tunnel, no white light
Cant lose focus in the night
My vision is blurry, I want to hurry
But all thats left to do is fight
Fight against myself, against my worries
That nothing will be alright tonight
My reality is standing still,
And Im left with a hole to fill,
My whole soul just lost control,
Over my own ideals, my own goals
I miss losing myself to my own pain,
Wasting my time without using my brain
Timing and accuracy, speed and consistency,
The only thing missing, is the old me
Pain in my muscles, joints, and bones
Didnt matter in front of that throne
Had I known how Id long those days
I wouldve chosen another way
But what isnt was never meant to be,
And what will be is still unknown to me
So I sit back in anger, wonder, and weep
As I listen in me to the thunder so deep
My eyes sparkle every time I reminisce
The lies I once thought Id never miss
While neglecting the beauty and glory
Of an ancient art, training, and stories.
Copyright ©
Xenodata
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2004-02-03 19:07:43]
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Re: Physical State Nostalgia
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 07:15:14 PM AEST
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My absolute favorite line: "Forward in a tunnel, no white light". It gives the perfect definition of the emtion you're conveying. There's no light at the end of the tunnel. No hope..... Very well said =) Nice write.
God bless,
Ellen |
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