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Minute Hand
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 10:35:53 PM in AEST
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Your eyes rest in
your plastic head, you're
Heading Here,
and Trodding There, your
rubber hands,
are slippery
And the minute hand
is straying
past the hour
slipping back,
you are...
and so
please join me
little swallow
to swallow this
and follow that
You stay so hollow,
Minute Hand.
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
... [
2004-02-03 22:35:53]
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Re: Minute Hand
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jazz on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 12:13:40 AM AEST
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Putting life into the minute hand was creative. I like the imagery.. Good one!
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Re: Minute Hand
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 01:52:27 AM AEST
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| Wow, I really liked this, it's intense yet done so in a rather understated way. Well done! |
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Re: Minute Hand
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by pooper on
Thursday, 25th November 2010 @ 06:08:50 AM AEST
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Well, tempus fugit on the hands of time.
And this obviously took time to write so, bravo. |
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