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Not the One
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
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Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 04:53:10 AM in AEST
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Happiness crumbled like neglected castle walls
Words cut me to pieces like a boat swept onto rocks
The feelings I thought we both gave and shared
On your part merely an empty box
My open heart crashed against the steel of your resistance
As you steered your emotion to someone new
The sweetest smile I had surrendered to
Now serving as farewell, a gift of icy cool
For a moment I imagined it was purely a dream
That the dark clouds would be blown with the lightest breeze
Colours of the rainbow so clearly I saw in you
Fading into the grey of your unfeeling mood
You vowed to keep a friendship, as people often do
As we stood together, washed by unrelenting rain
To your lips I placed my finger, asked for no promise
In time I knew you would forget, like last weeks headline news
With one last kiss, I took my pride, together with my heart
A little heavier than before, though a piece of it remained
I watched you leave, saw the headlights fade, life carried you away
As the mist curtained down, alone on the stage, accepting, that you were not the one
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Re: Not the One
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 05:04:07 AM AEST
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Oh wow, this sounds like me -n-my Tarzan. We vowed 2 stay friends but we lost touch 'bout four years ago.
I can certainly relate to this one.
Very good work of art here.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Not the One
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 06:38:44 AM AEST
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| I can relate to this. You've summed it up really well. |
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Re: Not the One
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 05:49:21 PM AEST
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Well expressed
Greay poem
Love sweet angel uk |
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Re: Not the One
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 05:50:00 PM AEST
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| Great sos spell check lol |
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Re: Not the One
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by positivelypurple on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 06:01:59 PM AEST
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Seriously...this one gave me goosebumps!! We all can relate... Excellent write!
Laurel |
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