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Ricky
Contributed by
pbeaman
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Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 10:19:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Today you will be seven
Angels must have sent you down from heaven
A perfect boy, a perfect son
Sent to me to see that the job is done
Ill try to do the right thing
Ill take you under my wing
show you right from wrong
Make you feel like you belong
Show you how to survive
Set you goals and make you strive
So be happy my little man
Ill pick you up when I can
Make me proud my son
You are a prize I have won
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pbeaman
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2004-02-04 10:19:35]
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Re: Ricky
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 01:19:07 PM AEST
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| Wow, you have so much love for your son, its incredible. Show it to him when he's older and can understand more, he will appreciate it. If my dad was like you, I'd be a happy normal person. |
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Re: Ricky
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by norticus on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 02:56:17 PM AEST
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What job is done? Getting the rhyme completed?
I give this a 3.1 on the Nortiscale.
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