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Sadism
Contributed by
viki
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Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 02:16:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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I was captivated by you,
but I wasted my time like a fool.
You didn't take long to show your true colors
Now my world is filled with crimson red displeasures.
Locked in a nightmareof no escape
Every night in servitude I'm being raped
My wrists and ankles are bound
I have no hope of being found
Your morbid enjoyment makes my body numb,
As I suffocate from your breath of rum
I'm silent and still but my thoughts are racing,
of what you are in the future facing.
When revenge is sought and you are bleeding,
you will have no tourniquet even if you're pleading.
And when your swears and cries begin to cease,
even then I hope your soul never rests in peace.
Copyright ©
viki
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Re: Sadism
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by Kellros on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:25:20 AM AEST
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| awesome poem! |
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Re: Sadism
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by hellsfallenangel on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 10:17:39 AM AEST
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nice write i liked it alot g2g bye
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Re: Sadism
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by justme03 on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 02:19:08 PM AEST
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| ME loves it! |
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Re: Sadism
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by princess_of_pain on
Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 11:20:58 PM AEST
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beautifully written, you did amazing job!! this is one of the best poems i've read in quite a long time.
keep writing, you're truly a great poet!!
~ally~ |
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Re: Sadism
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by Sinfullilmissmuppet on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 06:33:16 PM AEST
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I
Love
It
i was drawn in by the title because alot of my poems are sadistic in some respects
definately a great write
xo
emma |
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Re: Sadism
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 08:06:04 PM AEST
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| The images really stood out. I could almost see the poem. this was well written! |
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Re: Sadism
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by dypsomaniac on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 09:12:16 PM AEST
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| very nice. |
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