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Sweet Release
Contributed by
LaurenShields
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Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 10:42:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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O sweet release,
O natural high,
The demons escape,
Through the hurricaine's eye.
It calms the disease I feed within,
The rage that attacks the lengths of my skin.
I lay hypnotized in a crimson sleep,
dissasociated from the pain that begins to leak.
Streams of blood run down my arm,
No longer can your words cause me any harm.
Imploding with violence,
While screaming in silence,
These ghosts I face,
This hate erased.
Your tirade of anger provokes the blood,
Extraordinary standards that I can't rise above.
Its not what you think,
No attempt of suicide,
Rather,its my struggle,
My struggle to stay alive.
I want to make you happy,
I want to make you proud,
Instead so much worry floods me,
Lord I feel like I could drown.
So I'm left to remedy the stress,
The only way I know best,
And the cycle begins,
Cutting,
Slashing,
Will it ever end?
Copyright ©
LaurenShields
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2004-02-04 22:42:01]
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Re: Sweet Release
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by faith_my_eyes on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 11:01:03 PM AEST
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| oh my... you will be in my prayers |
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Re: Sweet Release
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by Jazz on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 11:04:35 PM AEST
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I am but 22, but many yrs ago, my life took an unexpected turn, and I started cutting, and when I wasn't, I was pricking my fingertips. My troubles were out of my body, with the blood. But it stoped, when I realized, that the scars last a lifetime, and I was ready to move on... I hope someday you find your sweet release in anything but crimson pain....
Jazz |
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Re: Sweet Release
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 01:59:09 AM AEST
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NO OFFENSE,I USED TO DO THE SAME STUPID THING! I FINALLY WOKE UP & REALIZED IT'S NOT HELPING,JUST HURTING ME & THE ONES I LOVE!! I HOPE
YOU CAN TELL THIS KIND OF BEHAVIOR TO F#$K OFF!!! GOOD POEM THOUGH!!!!
DAN!!!!! |
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Re: Sweet Release
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by Rawkergurl2003 on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 02:32:19 AM AEST
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im bound by the same emotions my dear. i shed enough blood to free all of my problems twice over..but it just doesnt seem enough. i pray for you however, you do not need this hurt. good luck with life and keep up the increadiable writes.
much love
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Re: Sweet Release
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 05:23:13 PM AEST
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I am so there.. this really hit home.. actually ive written a poem with the same title, but yours is something else.. painfully beautiful..
charlotte x_x_x |
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