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Demands of the Group
Contributed by
TundraHydra
on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 11:28:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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My head
Its pounding
Its ringing with pain
A pain that I cant rightly explain
The sound
So loud
Loud to where its bright
Intense with every burst of light
You all
Annoying chattering
Not a breath of silence
Words clash like violence
Put them all away
Keep the words that you shouldnt say
Lock your voices in a chest
Saved for a shouting test
Just give me some space to breath
Just give me a place to kneel
Just give me something to feel
Just leave me so I can heal
All the pain drifting away with you
Thanks for understanding
All the pain
Brought on by your demanding
Copyright ©
TundraHydra
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2004-02-04 23:28:34]
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Re: Demands of the Group
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by Jazz on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 11:39:15 PM AEST
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The meaning behind is deep. It sounds like a rap song! I enjoyed this!
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Re: Demands of the Group
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by TundraHydra on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 11:49:44 PM AEST
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| This is the real one. my computer messed up and sent two and I meant the original to be a self-struggle. |
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Re: Demands of the Group
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by Rawkergurl2003 on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 03:42:08 PM AEST
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great write.. i loved it..the meaning is soo intense.
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