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Pain
Contributed by
JadedExistence
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Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 01:48:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Wrenching, twisting, tearing
Clawing at my insides
No reason for caring
A black hole of despair
Unable to escape
More than I can bear
Empty inside, no emotions
No love, life, or peace
Just going through the motions
They think it might help, these loving words spoken
No one understands, not family or friends
They think I'm just bent, don't know I'm broken
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JadedExistence
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2004-02-05 01:48:50]
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Re: Pain
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 01:53:46 AM AEST
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THAT WAS REALLY NEAT HOW YOU WROTE & PIECED IT TOGETHER! YOU HAVE A GOOD WAY WITH WORDS!!
DAN!!! |
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