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Never Let Me Out

Contributed by rawkergurl2003 on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 02:17:58 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



You bleed for me your words,
And abuse me with your thoughts.
You control me with your power,
And never let me out.
You keep me in the dark,
Locked up and out of site,
Tell me Im the only one
That will make your life complete.
You say the others arent good enough
And Im the only one for you.
But then you turn around and say
Im never good enough.
You hit me with your emotions
Then take them all away.
You beat me with you strength
till darkness fades to day.
Then you tell me youre so sorry
You didnt mean for it to get this way.
You bleed for me your words,
And abuse me with your thoughts.
You control me with your power,
And never let me out.
What if one day I am to be free,
Then what will you do?
Will you bow down and cry
As you pray Ill be by your side?
Or will you just explain to me
That your heart just isnt complete?
It doesnt matter anyway,
I know itll never be,
Because without this thing that you call love
I wouldnt know what to do.
So bleed for me your words,
And abuse me with your thoughts.
Control me with your power
Never let me out!




Copyright © rawkergurl2003 ... [ 2004-02-05 02:17:58]
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Re: Never Let Me Out (User Rating: 1 )
by winged on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 05:04:37 AM AEST
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wow, that is such a strong poem. Thank you for sharing it


Re: Never Let Me Out (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 10:20:00 AM AEST
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Outstanding poetry my friend...
Very well done

Larry




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