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Rachel
Contributed by
ToriVeigh
on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 08:59:07 AM in AEST
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Her smile, her laugh
Her style, her craft
She is fun loving
Seemingly free
No care of whos watching
How did she come from me?
She is wonderful
She makes me proud
She has a beautiful soul
She stands out in the crowd
She can make me grin
She can ***** me off
I want her to win
To always be well off
With a devilish smirk
She can be an angel
I love each little quirk
She's my beautiful Rachel
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ToriVeigh
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2004-02-05 08:59:07]
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Re: Rachel
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by venkat on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 01:42:42 AM AEST
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Well..this is beautiful.......dear Toriveigh.
seen your comment on my poem "Diana's Bow I give.."
it seems you have never gone through the forum "soul to soul" under poetic thoughts..
my poem is only a reply to the thread on that forum..hope you will understand.. venkat |
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