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Pedestal Stare
Contributed by
winged
on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 09:34:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel yours eye
On my neck, back,
I feel you look me over
With one long stare
Can you see my secrets?
Hidden, in just one stare?
Sometimes it hurts so much
And that one stare
Pierces me from head to foot
Can't you tell
With just one look?
Catch me if I fall?
Off my pedestal
Can't be the one
You want me to be
I just want to be free
Free of pain
Free of hurt
Free of the stare
That let's me know you care
I want to be gone
Not be the example
Don't want to be strong
Can't you see I'm drowing
In your pity?
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winged
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2004-02-05 09:34:30]
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Re: Pedestal Stare
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by Putteragain on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 02:09:54 PM AEST
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I understad the feeling in this and it is a very good poem
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Re: Pedestal Stare
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by kayald on
Sunday, 22nd February 2004 @ 10:23:08 PM AEST
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| I really liked this poem because it is so real and raw. |
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