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The Paradox Of Pages
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 05:21:39 PM in AEST
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To the fathers of all our misguided sons
To beginning of time, the ending of life
Disgraceful are these words that I speak
But when wasnt the truth so colourful?
Resting in a place where reality has no effect
Lay the open books of all our lives
Stained with the blood and the tears of regret
Placed on a page where words dont exist
Your tainted eyes skipping the pages
Of this this book that never ends
When will you realise, why wont you believe
The ending was never in your grasp
Searching within for this illusion to end
This novel of existence burning your soul
Closed will be the book that encircles your life
As it remembers the ink you stole from inside
Powerful are these words, that dont exist in time
A paradox of language, engraved upon this page
Within this sphere of lifes nonentity
Listening to the visions of a felo-de-se.
Copyright ©
forever_lonely
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2004-02-05 17:21:39]
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Re: The Paradox Of Pages
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 05:57:33 PM AEST
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wow! an amazing write! this is excellent, the images, intangibly awesome!! by far my new favorite of yours! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Paradox Of Pages
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by Angelic_Demon on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:08:43 PM AEST
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Wow. This is really good... Very well written.
Blessed Be,
Mars |
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Re: The Paradox Of Pages
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by Kie on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:48:08 PM AEST
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| You are so talented. I really enjoy reading all of your poems. This one was fabulous! Kie |
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Re: The Paradox Of Pages
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 10:48:41 PM AEST
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Excellently written and composed, I had to read a couple of times just so I could grasp the full detail of what you were trying to portray.
Very well done. |
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Re: The Paradox Of Pages
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by TantricMoon on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 03:02:14 AM AEST
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| You are a great wordsmith ... have read this many times over. |
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Re: The Paradox Of Pages
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 08:14:54 AM AEST
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Luke...you've been posting some insanely good poems lately. This is one of the deepest, best written, and relatable poems i've seen you write. You have out done yourself, my friend.
Oh, and the last two lines were razor sharp...awesome.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: The Paradox Of Pages
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 05:33:08 PM AEST
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My god what a stunning deep poem, I don't know what to say all those comments captured what i wanted to say. You're poetry is one of the best around here, you're writing is really great can't believe i got the opportunity to get to know such a great poet! Keep on writing! I love your poems! They hold a lot of meaning.
Anne :D |
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Re: The Paradox Of Pages
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:56:29 AM AEST
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Grandiose in measure. Intrinsically woven with almost baroque imaginative prowesssssssssssss.
I like. I like a lot. |
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Re: The Paradox Of Pages
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 05:41:49 PM AEST
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| I couldnt understand this..but again it was very well laid out. |
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