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Drowning
Contributed by
Elf
on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:14:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Falling deeper
into dark,
Ever spinning
into nothing.
Breathless now
no air to breathe;
Feels as if
my chest will crush.
I fight the weight
placed upon my body.
My movements
are slowing,
My vision yet
Still unimpared,
I watch myself
begin to die.
My eyes slowly
glaze over,
And my breath;
it slowly stops.
My mind
stops its panic.
They finally got
what they wanted.
They drowned me
in their lies.
Copyright ©
Elf
... [
2004-02-05 19:14:09]
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Re: Drowning
(User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:20:19 PM AEST
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But you got through it! Stay strong.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Drowning
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 10:44:48 PM AEST
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| Totaly sad, Heartbreaking to read, But it was an exceptional poem. |
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