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Given My All
Contributed by
TheDon
on
Wednesday, 10th July 2002 @ 10:47:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I gave you diamonds, but you merely wanted a pearl.
I gave you the universe, but you just wanted the world.
I gave you the whole world, but you only wanted half.
I gave you first place, but youd rather be last.
I gave you the oceans, but you only wanted the sea.
I gave you the secret to my heart, but you wanted the key.
I gave you happiness, but you just wanted joy.
I gave you communication, but youd rather be coy.
I gave you forever, but you wanted to the end.
I gave you a man, but you preferred just a friend.
I gave you my everything, but you only wanted me.
No matter what I couldnt satisfy you; it wasnt meant to be.
Copyright ©
TheDon
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2002-07-10 22:47:57]
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Re: Given My All
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by RockinRose on
Saturday, 24th August 2002 @ 07:29:27 AM AEST
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| whoa...very, very sad yet true poem, writen really well |
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Re: Given My All
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by starierose on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 06:19:22 PM AEST
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| I know I'm not a professional on judging your poem but I thought that it was good. It's sad because you wanted to give your all but it just didn't work I liked it, |
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Re: Given My All
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 09:08:13 AM AEST
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| some people aren't meant to be in love, just friends, sadley, and your poem is so beautiful, so touching, ty for sharing:) hugs nessa |
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Re: Given My All
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 11:24:01 PM AEST
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| wow i am surprised your poem doesnt have any more comments than it does i think it is a very cute poem and true for a lot of people too i am sure and touching.... good job... i loved it...... carrielynn age: 17 i have some written you should read mine my name on here is carrielynn |
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Re: Given My All
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by snowflakegrl333 on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 08:50:00 PM AEST
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| My Goodness. I had tears in my eyes after reading your poem.It really hit home with what I have recently experianced. |
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