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I'm sorry part 2
Contributed by
lildrama04
on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:37:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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I'm sorry that I couldn't
tell you the truth about
why I didn't want to live anymore.
I'm sorry that I broke your
heart the way that I did
I never meant for it
to turn out like this
I never wanted to fall in
love with you and want you
to fell like you couldn't
trust me because of all the
things that I did in the past
I'm sorry that I couldn't
look you in the eyes and tell
you that I loved you with all my
heart and that I couldn't stand to
be around you anymore.
I'm sorry if I made you not
want to look me in the eyes
and tell me what you really
had on your mind.
I'm sorry if I broke your
heart but I couldn't go on
another day knowing that
you never wanted to be around
me again.
I'm really really really sorry that
I broke you in two the way that I did
I never meant to break your heart.
I never wanted you to not
want to be my friend anymore
because of what I did.
I know that it was very stupid to
go out and get drunk and then not
tell you the truth. I never wanted to
do it but I just did.
And I know that you may never
forgive me for everything that I did
but I wish that you could maybe
find away in your heart to forgive
everything that I have done to you.
I miss your friendship and I hope maybe
if you ever get this that I will never
forget you at all.
So this is the last time that I will say
it I'm sorry.
Copyright ©
lildrama04
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2004-02-05 19:37:26]
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Re: I'm sorry part 2
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by Remy on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 07:49:04 PM AEST
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redudancy has a power all it's own, hope the receipient of this apology takes it! good write!
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Re: I'm sorry part 2
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by norticus on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 10:25:04 AM AEST
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One word - editing... I give this a 2.8 on the Nortiscale because it is a good start with a lot of feeling.
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Re: I'm sorry part 2
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by NirvanaLotus on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 11:44:29 AM AEST
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| wonderful apology. its beutiful and it really shows your feelings |
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