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Blame
Contributed by
MariaXsoccerXrock
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Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 09:46:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Everything inside my head every time i think im dead i wake up to see im not turn my head and change the clock 12 hours back so i can pretend that this night will never end that i'll never have to spend 1 more day living the life i hate in every way
and all these feelings deep inside wanting to cry, wanting to die my tears, fears and all the beers lead me to you and i blame you I BLAME YOU
Throw the empty bottle in the air and onto the ground shatters like the pieces of my heart but i have no sound my tears are quiet and so i hide all these feelings deep inside and all of this leads me to you and i blame you I BLAME YOU
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Re: Blame
(User Rating: 1 ) by sicknivesevered on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 10:06:02 PM AEST (User
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Hoohoo! I love the flow of this. It was like my eyes were cascading down a waterfall of blood and hate!!! Wee!!! Good write. |
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Re: Blame
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 10:19:51 PM AEST (User
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I love this! Especially the first stanza, the rhymes and flow are awesome. Great write!
~ Moonlit |
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