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Singled Out
Contributed by
rawkergurl2003
on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 11:30:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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A little boy sits alone
Along a jagged curb,
He wonders why its been so long
Since his mother has been gone.
He ponders the meaning of the rose
Thats wilted and forgotten.
There are so many over there
But this ones singled out.
Then he sees a single bird
Perching on the roof
He wonders why its sitting there,
Picking at its food.
Finally his eyes have found
A little tiny ant,
Now this one seems to be
Far behind the marching group
That continues on ahead.
And as this little boy sits alone
He wonders why hes there,
Why he is seeing all these objects
Being singled out.
Then a thought comes to his head
He has confirmed it once again
The only reason hes alone
Is no one sees the ghosts.
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2004-02-05 23:30:15]
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Re: Singled Out
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 11:47:53 PM AEST
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Very interesting write.
Well done
Larry |
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Re: Singled Out
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 12:07:04 AM AEST
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| wow, love your thoughts here, great style too, so he is a ghost, beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Singled Out
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by Rawkergurl2003 on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 12:47:15 AM AEST
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hey nessa,
ya the boy is a ghost. its based on a little boy i knew when i was little..he was killed in a car accident at four. sad story..but n e ways... thanx for the comments.. |
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