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Without you
Contributed by
lildrama04
on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 07:10:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The pain is so real
It’s deep down in my soul
Everything that I try to do
To get rid of it never works.
The pain is so deep down
In my heart that when ever
I think about it hurts so much.
Sometimes when the pain is
Really strong I just want to kill
Myself but if can never go through
with it.
Everytime that I try to kill
Myself I can never find
Away to do it
Sometimes when the pain is
Really really strong I just want
To leave this world and never come
Back again.
The pain is so real
It’s deep down in my soul
Everything that I try to do
To get rid of it never works.
Copyright ©
lildrama04
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2004-02-06 19:10:09]
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Re: Without you
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 08:38:08 PM AEST
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The simplicity of this made it all the more painful to read this touched me deeply as I have been there before. I liked the unique structure of the lines made for a funky read. Hold on.
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Re: Without you
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by norticus on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 10:22:28 AM AEST
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De ja vu' (the apostrophe is supposed to be over the u) 1 on the Nortiscale.
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