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The Rose
Contributed by
Elf
on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 09:40:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A deepest red,
Beautiful to behold
Delicate and simple.
But strong and speaking loud.
Of love within
Of love to come
Of everything
You want for me.
But before long,
my rose begins to fade.
Turning dark.
From red to black.
The petals turn
A sable black.
The thorns are
harsher than before.
My beautiful rose
has been poisoned;
Now is left as
beautifully black.
Copyright ©
Elf
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2004-02-06 21:40:45]
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Re: The Rose
(User Rating: 1 )
by Shadow on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 07:56:10 PM AEST
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| You are most defenitly the rose! lol. But seriously now. I liked it. It realy spoke to me. Harsh yet hopeful. Good poem! |
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