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1,000 tears more
Contributed by
booboo
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Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 10:26:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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all i've been doing is crying,
crying my 1,000 tears
wishing you would come back to me
wishing you were here.
it seems right now as if you want,
want to hurt me even more
i wish that you could understand that
my heart is already sore.
i still cry a 1,000 tears 'cause you
throw alot of loving in my face
i tried and tried but i can't move on
i don't know why i think you can be replaced
i don't understand how you could tell me
that you would never stop loving me
everytime i turn around i cry
tears my eyes can see
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booboo
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2004-02-06 22:26:50]
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Re: 1,000 tears more
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 03:32:23 PM AEST
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So much pain! This poem is written magnificently, flowing and ryhmic and holds a lot of emotion Loved it!
Anne :D |
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Re: 1,000 tears more
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 03:45:05 PM AEST
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May joy be returned to your life...
Take care, my friend, and heal.
David |
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Re: 1,000 tears more
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by Kie on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 09:08:00 PM AEST
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| The title drew my eye. I've been there, I am there. If my tears were measured sometimes I wonder if the grand canyon could hold all of them. I could really relate to this one. Thank you for sharing it. Kie |
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