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~Your Eyes~(Oh Sweet Love!Take Me Away!)
Contributed by
PumpkinPie
on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 01:06:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your eyes reflect a thousand violins all come together
A vibrant orchestra of a song so sweet, so pure
The prettiest symphony available to all those who don't fail to see
An euphony capable of bringing me to absolute ecstasy
Your eyes display the resolution for everything obscure
The glitter in the ocean's waves gathered ashore
The silver moon guiding the path through the midst of the forest
The soothing whisper that you're still here when everything fails to exist
In your eyes I finally found a haven for my heart
A sanctuary where I can rest-my only wish is to never part
I only hope one day you'll find be able to find the nirvana in mine
Where one day our eyes will reside in eachother's soul,till then sweet love,my heart is thine.
Copyright ©
PumpkinPie
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2004-02-07 01:06:29]
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Re: ~Your Eyes~(Oh Sweet Love!Take Me Away!)
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by loveisendless on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 03:39:13 AM AEST
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NICE POEM! REALLY SMOOTH!! IT REALLY
SOUNDED ROMANTIC!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: ~Your Eyes~(Oh Sweet Love!Take Me Away!)
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by shelby on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 01:49:05 PM AEST
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this wrapped me up with such a warm feeling reading it lovely!
michelle |
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Re: ~Your Eyes~(Oh Sweet Love!Take Me Away!)
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by emystar on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 11:04:00 PM AEST
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Sweet, great write!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: ~Your Eyes~(Oh Sweet Love!Take Me Away!)
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 09:35:05 AM AEST
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| soothing and slendid, loved the whole thing, take care Val |
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Re: ~Your Eyes~(Oh Sweet Love!Take Me Away!)
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:45:34 PM AEST
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| beautifully stunning, loved this, take care, Val |
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Re: ~Your Eyes~(Oh Sweet Love!Take Me Away!)
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 12:11:58 AM AEST
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| pumpkinpie-with a write like this im sure you can captivate any heart.that was stunning,you should make him read this poem :) :) :)-Kylie-xxx |
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Re: ~Your Eyes~(Oh Sweet Love!Take Me Away!)
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 10:29:05 PM AEST
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Beautiful.
Spazzo |
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Re: ~Your Eyes~(Oh Sweet Love!Take Me Away!)
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 12:17:09 AM AEST
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| A brilliant and beautiful vivid masterpiece. |
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